Can someone critize my paper???

In my 1230 English class, I received a very unique opportunity to interview one of my peers in class. I appreciate the experience because it allows people to see people around them for what they are really worth. You never really know much about the people who are sitting around you or that you might encounter everyday until you sit down and speak with them. The peer I had the chance to interview was 15 – year old Mauricio Castro, with no relation to Fidel he told me. Now the first thing that would come to mind is, “Why is there a 15 year-old student in my college English class?” but actually he is a dual enrollee, meaning he is still in high school but he is taking some early college courses.

Mauricio was born in Newark, New Jersey, and is a Colombian American. He has family residing in New Jersey, but most are in Colombia. One day in his young childhood his dad, whom worked in New York, was told he had to transfer to Miami, Florida. “Where going to live in a place called Coconut Creek, Florida,” Mauricio was told by his father. Young Mauricio was not looking forward to moving to some country suburb which he was envisioning. Upon arriving, his fears had been justified. They moved to a small suburb in Coconut Creek, just off of Wiles road and Lyons road. When they got there, it was just a small apartment community with nothing in the nearby vicinity. He had to share one small bedroom with a younger brother and