Substitution of long phrases with shorter and more precise word?
1 the realisation of the fact
2 complicates further
the whole sentence is:
The realisation of the fact that old Mr Lee has kidney failure complicates further the family’s financial problem.
Generalize
1 chickens, ducks, geese and turkeys
2 the difficulty in getting the right inspiration, the long hours of drafting and editing, the nights when I was buried under heaps of papers
3 Surrounded by the magnificent mountains and evergreen trees, the town painted before us a paradise. The white sandy beach and clear sparkling water added further to our excitement.
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comprehension/awareness
2 complicates further
worsens
1 chickens, ducks, geese and turkeys
fowl/poultry
2 the difficulty in getting the right inspiration, the long hours of drafting and editing, the nights when I was buried under heaps of papers
the arduous steps involved in the writing process
3 Surrounded by the magnificent mountains and evergreen trees, the town painted before us a paradise. The white sandy beach and clear sparkling water added further to our excitement.
The beauty of the panorama surrounding the town enhanced our excitement.