Please help me on my thesis statement..greatly appreciated it?
My topic is Cellphone should not be used while driving.
I am going to be aruguing these two points..
1.) Your brain is only accustomed to doing one task at a time that is not already registered into muscle memory (walking, chewing gum, etc.).
2)cell phone conversations reduces concentration level
How can I put these points into my thesis statement in my intorduction paragraph?
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I don’t know, the last sentence sounds rough but I have written it a dozen different ways. Perhaps you can add some polish. I don’t have a cell phone for two reasons. I don’t want to be on that long of a leash and I do know how dangerous it can be to operate in automatic mode.
Good luck on the thesis. I hope you open a hundred million sets of eyes.
