Please edit this sentence- do I need comma before “or” and do I need the word “why’ after reason?
I’m not sure if I need to use a comma before “or” being there are only 2 ideas in this sentence? Also do I need the word “why” after reason? Please reply ASAP anyone that knows FOR SURE, thanks
“Is the reason WHY you don’t want to be friend with your cousin because you are holding a a grudge with him, or because you dont have anything in common?
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Comma before the ‘or’ , no ‘why’, but other changes are needed:
Is the reason you don’t want to be a friend to
[or ‘to be friends with’ – idiomatic] your cousin because you are holding a grudge against him, or because you don’t have anything in common?
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I would write, “Is the reason you don’t want to be friends with your cousin because you are holding a grudge against him or because you don’t have anything in common.”
no comma before “or”.
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4 years ago
i could write, “Is the reason you do no longer choose to be associates at the same time with your cousin considering you’re conserving a grudge against him or considering you haven’t any longer something in difficulty-loose.” no comma till now “or”.
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