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help with sentence structure?

how can i switch up a few words in this sentence to make it sound better…

“one of the main reasons why she does not marry him is because he is considered poor and she is rich”

how can i make this sentence better? thanks

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irishredfishstick

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one of the main reasons why she doesn’t marry him is that he if often considered poor while she is known to be wealthy.
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Michelle My Bell
She will not marry him because he is poor and she is rich, this is not the only reason but it is the main one.

I don’t know if you are writing a paper or a book but I like the long sentences better.

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ruth4526
Because she is rich, is one of the main reasons she won’t marry the poor man.
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Timothy C
One of the reasons she does not marry him, he is considered to be poor, and she is rich.
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Anonymous
“One of the main reasons why she does not want to marry him is the fact that she is rich while he, on the otherhand, is poor.”

or straight to the point?…

“She does not want to marry him because she is rich and he is poor.”

😉

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JOR-G
One of the reasons she dosen’t marry him is because she considers him poor.
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Silly Sally
She won’t marry him because he is poor and she is rich.
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geisha
One of the main reasons why she would not marry him is because of their financial status. She is more financially stable than him.
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