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grammar question?

read this sentenses and correct any tense errors

a) home computers are becoming more and more popular

b) this week, the shop sells sowtware at 20% off.

c) Don’t use the phone downstairs for the next twenty minutes as i am surfing the web

d) as soon as you are using the computer, you realise how helpful it is.

e) when you buy a new computer, you are getting a lot of free software

f) many children prefer computers to books

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Anonymous

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Perfect!

No Tense Error.

Only one glaring Grammatical (punctuation) Mistake is the First Letter of Every Sentence should beging with a Capital Letter.

Sentence a) given in the question should read as:

a) Home computers are becoming more and more popular.

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ndwyvern
For D and E, you don’t have to use “are.” Try something like “As soon as you use the computer, you realize how helpful it is,” or “When you buy a computer, you get a lot of free software.” The way you have it now sounds a bit awkward. Other than that, it looks OK–though remember to capitalize at the beginning of every sentence.
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thisbrit
/This sentences/ is wrong. These sentences or this sentence.

No tense errors as far as I can see.

Some capital letters missing. and periods at the ends.

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pizza192002
Theese sentences are right.
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chameleon
No.

Say please next time.

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