Finish this sentence (I can’t find the right word)!?
I’m writing this from the perspective of a teenager, so “my peers” are teenagers also, who have only just developed political opinoins. I’m trying to say that my peers are against tradition and want change (becaue they’re young and more modern-thinking). How can I word this more concisely and eloquently?
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Second, a peer is an equal. Applying an adjective is superlative based on your description. You may also want to move the “for example” to the beginning of the sentence.
“For example, the Catholic Church’s teachings on abortion and gay marriage became the object of much criticism by my peers.”
By the way, do you and your peers oppose tradition, or merely question it (as every generation does). Desiring change is also a common trait of youth. I am not being critical, I believe we need the youthful perspective in order to advance as a society.
How about: “For example, the Catholic Church’s stance on abortion and gay marriage received much criticism from my 21st century peers.”
p.s. May I also add, that like my colleague below, I’ve noted that your question is highly appealing in it’s subtle allusions to what you’re “really asking”, and a scintillating play on words. Please do note as well that my answer to you is also a play on words – a
p.s.s. But please don’t entice me further to add long and verbose essays on Abortion, Free Will, The State of the Union of Marriage, Life, and the Universe too.
Anyway, to answer your question, some choice words and phrases could include:
Progressive
Liberal
Open-minded
less conservative
etc.
P.S. Alternatively, I would suggest: … ___broadminded__ peers.
P.S.S. I must say I also enjoyed your clever strategy of taking a concealed stab at the Catholic Church, and lumping abortion rights and gay marriages under the same-cloaked commentary. … Nice job my “teenage” friend! … LOL
progressive
iconoclastic
“…teachings…became the recipients of much criticism…”
This doesn’t work, as teachings aren’t going to receive anything. It would be better to use “…teachings…became the (target or subject) of much criticism…”