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Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He drank, smoked, slept at midnight, stole and fought with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didnt listen to his parents.

One day , he had a headache so he decided to cisit the doctor to find out what was wrong with him. He went to the hospital and was suprised.

Do you know what the doctor told him??? Do you know what he heard? The doctor told him that he had cancer and might die in a few months. His heart was broken, he felt like he had fallen from the sky, he felt like a jailbird. He started to cry. He didnt know what to do or where to go and how to tell his parents and friends. His life started to change. He started to respect his parents. He stopped drinking, smoking and stealing. One month later he had an appointment so he went to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he had no cancer and that he was not sick. He asked the doctor how that happened and the doctor told him that it was someone else’s report. He didnt believe that and he started to cry and cry. He felt like a new person, like he was born again. He was very happy , like someone who was drowning and escaped death. He thanked God for that and decided he would not change his behaviour and will be a good person.

I learnt from this person that as you sow, so shall you reap. Everyman has his faults and needs to be aware of them. Also it is no use crying over spilt milk. Finally where there is a will there is a way.

There!! all done!!!

Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He was drinking, smoking, sleeping at midnight, stealing and fighting with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didn`t listen to his parents. One day, he had a headache. So he decided to visit the doctor and find out whats wrong with him. He went to the hospital and he was surprised. Do you know what did the doctor told him? Do you know what he heard? The doctor told him that he had a cancer and he might die after a few months. His heart was broken. He was like someone who fell down from the sky. He felt like a bird in a jail. He started to cry. He didn’t know what to do, where to go, and how to tell his parents and his friend. His life started to change. He started to respect his parents. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stealing. He had an appointment after one month. So he decided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn’t have anything. He told him that he is not sick. He asked the doctor how come. The doctor told him it was not his analysis it was for another person. He didn’t believe that, so he started to cry and cry. He was like a new person who was just born just this moment. He was very happy. He was like a drowning person who escaped from the death. He thanked God for that and came to a decision that he will not change his behavior, and he will be a good person.

I learned from this person that as you sow, so shall you reap on every man has his faults so every man have to know about his faults. Also it is no use crying over spilled milk. Finally, where there’s a will, there’s a way.

his pearants. he was a bad boy. he didn`t listeon to his pearnts. One day, he had head ack, so he disided to visit the doctor and know what wrong with him. he went to the hospital, and he was serppriesed. Do you know what did the doctor tell him??, Do you know what did he hear?? The doctor told him that he had a conslor and he might die after few month. His hart was broken.he was like some one fill down from the sky.he felt like a baird in a jill. He start to cry. He didn’t know what to do, where to go, and how to tell his pearants and his friend. his life started to change. He started to respict his perants. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stelling. He had an a poemant after one month, so he disided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn’t have any thing. He told him that he is not sick. He asked the doctor how that came, the doctor told him it was not his analysis it was for another person. He didn’t belive that, so he started to cry and cry. he was like new person who born just this moment. He was very happy. he was like a drowning who escape from the death. He thaked god for that and come to a decision that he will not cahnge his behavior, and he will be a good person.

I learn from this person that As you sow, so will you reapound every man has his faults so every man have to know about his

faults. Also it is no use cuying over spilt milk. Finally where thave’s a will, there’s away. CHECK ANOTHER ANSWERS

Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He drankand smoked and never got up until midnight. He stole and fought with his parents. He was a very bad boy. He would not listen to his parents. One day he had a head ache so he decided to visit the doctor to find out what was wrong with him. He went to the hospital and was he ever surprised. Can you imagine what the doctor told him? The doctor told him that he had a cancer and that he might die in just a few months. His heart was broken. He felt like he had fallen from the sky. He felt like a bird in jail. He began wo weep. He didn’t know what to do or where to go. He couldn’t imagine how to tell his parents and his friends that he was dying. Then his life began to change. He started to respect his parents. He stopped drinking and smoking and stealing. The next month when he went for his doctors appointment the doctor told him that he was not sick, that there had been a mistake, that his medical reports had been mixed up with another patients.

The boy began to cry for joy, he could hardly believe what he was hearing. He felt like a drowning person who had been saved and could breath again.

He thanked God for his life and made a decision that he would not change back to his bad behavior , that instead he would continue on the path he had started to be a good person.

I learned from this persons story that “As you sow, so shall you reap”. I learned that everyone has their faults and everyone must become aware of their own faults. I also learned that there is no use crying over spild mild. And finally I learned, where there is a will, there is a way.

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Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He was drinking, smoking, sleeping at midnight, stealing and fighting with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didn`t listen to his parents. One day, he had head ache, so he decided to visit the doctor to know what was wrong with him. He went to the hospital, and he was suprised. Do you know what did the doctor told him? Do you know what he heard? The doctor told him that he had a conslor (this is the thing I don’t know how to correct) and he might die after a few months. His heart was broken. He felt like someone fell down from the sky. He felt like a bird in a jail. He started to cry. He didn’t know what to do, where to go, or how to tell his parents and his friends. His life started to change. He started to respect his parents. He stopped drinking, smoking, and stealing. He had an appointment after one month, so he decided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn’t have anything. He told him that he was not sick. He asked the doctor how that came, the doctor told him it was not his analysis it was for another person. He couldn’t belive it, so he started to cry and cry. He was like new person who born this moment. He was very happy. He felt like he was drowning and escaped from the death. He thaked God for that and come to a decision that he will not change his behavior, and he would be a good person.

I learned from this person that as you sow, so will you repound. Every man has his faults so every man have to know about his faults. Also it is no use crying over spilt milk. Finally when there’s a will, there’s a way.