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Find out how you can own a week in paradise on the beach in beautiful Cape Cod.
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That’s a very poorly written sentence. Is it in “paradise” or “Cape Cod”, or do I get a choice??? Try it this way…
Find out how you can own a week of paradise on the beach in beautiful Cape Cod.
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Karen’s was pretty close. I would just change the ‘own’ to ‘spend’:
Find out how you can SPEND a week of paradise on the beach in beautiful Cape Cod.
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Yes.
Additional: I was going to say something about not being able to own a moment in time, but since any experience you have is yours then you would own it.
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You can’t ‘own a week.’ Say ‘rent a week.’ It’s both more grammatically and logically correct.
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yeah it’s written correctly:)Maybe you just need to put a comma somewhere!
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yeah
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no one’s going to buy your timeshare
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sure
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