whats a good title for my narrating paragraph?
Favorite Answer
“The Day When Everything Change”
“Life Will Never Be The Same”
“One Accident, Lives Lost”
“One Accident Can Change Lives Forever”
“Don’t Drink and Drive: One Accident Can Change Lives Forever”
P.S. I took the liberty to correct your grammatical errors…
On September 29, 2001 I received the sad news about Aunt Valerie and Uncle Jim. At precisely 10:32 p.m., I received a call from my mother, Emily, saying my Aunt Valerie (age 27) and Uncle Jim (age 29) had been in a terrible car accident. My Aunt and Uncle had been hit by a drunk driver while driving home from work on Highway 694 West in Minneapolis, Minnesota.
My Aunt and Uncle normally took Hwy 694 West home to Fridley, Minnesota, but this one day was not like every other day. Something happened this day that would change lives forever. One accident that would result in many lives lost.
Apparently, a black Chevrolet pickup behind my Aunt and Uncle’s 2004 black Honda rearended them. This black pickup (with a drunk driver behind the wheel) was trying to pass my Aunt and Uncle’s Honda from behind, but in the process of changing lanes, the pickup got hit by another passing vehicle, causing the pickup to crash into the Honda. Upon impact, my Aunt and Uncle’s car flipped over and landed in a ditch full of water.
The paramedics and fire department arrived on the scene only to find Uncle Jim not breathing. Although they made every attempt to revive my Uncle, nothing they tried seemed to work and finally they pronounced him dead at the scene. Sadly, the driver of the pickup truck was also pronounced dead at the scene. My Aunt Valerie was rushed to the hospital, but she, too, lost her fight to live that unfateful day.
It was only one accident, yet three lives were lost. It was only one accident, yet it has impacted not only the lives that were lost, but the lives of other people like myself. My life has been changed forever. My life will never be the same. I can never have my Aunt Valerie and Uncle Jim back; they only live in my heart as memories.
But you most certainly need to do some work on this before you hand it in. At present, it is only a rough draft.
