starting a story?
‘There was once upon a time where a place called ….’ does it sound right?
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no u should say Once upon a time there was a place called….
rings better
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Once upon a time, in a place called, …..
this sounds better
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try to be more inventive. if you’re absolutely set on using the once upon a time thing, go for something like “In a distant land, there was a place that, once upon a time, may have …… “
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No try Once apon a time in a place called hope this helps
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No, there are too many non flowing words. I understand where you are trying to go, though. Try something like ‘A long time ago at a place called…’ or ‘Long ago in a place called…’ Good Luck
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If you want it to be stereotypical & cliched then it’s fine.
I prefer something along the lines of
“My name is unimportant, but you can call me Jack. I’m a musician by choice, a magician by profession, and a bastard by disposition.”
Which are the actual first words of a friend of mines first novel (Hunters Moon by David Devereux)
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no
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eh, sorry, no.
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