question about sentence structure! quick!?
He entered the Art Department of Temple University but left without finishing his STUDY IN FIELDS OF radio, television and film.
is the bolded part okay? or do i need to change the sturucture of the sentence completely?
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No.
If there is anything you might need to do…
is instead if “He”… use his name.
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He entered the Art Department of Temple University but left without finishing his STUDIES in THE fields of radio, television, and film. c”,)
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Assuming that radio, television, and film are part of one department or one major, it should read, “…without finishing his studies in the field of radio, television, and film.”
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he left without finishing his studies in the fields of radio, television and film.
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his study in the fields of Radio, Television, and Film.
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