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Need help shortening a quote, it is very long!!! What sould i keep?

It woudl be nice if you could show me what all i could cut out of this quote, but still keep the main story. This is a quotes project for Honors English 2. Thanks to anyone who helps me.

Here is the quote:

“And he said, ‘I killed Wellington, Christopher.’

I wondered if this was a joke, because I don’t understand jokes, and when people tell jokes they don’t mean what they say.

But then Father said, ‘Please Christopher. Just…let me explain.’ Then he sucked in some air and he said, ‘When your mum left…Eileen…Mrs. Shears…she was very good to us. Very good to me. She helped me through a very difficult time. And I’m not sure I would have made it without her. Well, you know how she was around here most days. Helping out with the cooking and the cleaning. Popping over to see if we were OK, if we needed anything…I thought…Well…****, Christopher, I’m trying to keep this simple…I thought she might carry on coming over.

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Samantha

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Take out the excess details, but replace them with periods. For example:

“And he said, ‘I killed Wellington, Christopher.’

I wondered if this was a joke….. But then Father said….”

You can keep the main details, but you can’t just “cut out” the rest. You have to cite it correctly. You either write out the entire quote, or use the periods.

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kk1977
First, you should assume that the person who is reading your paper has already read the story themselves. Therefore, you don’t need to explain so much to them. Just give them the highlights.

Or you can also try paraphrasing the quote. Try covering up the quote with your hand and explaining what happens in a few sentences.

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treebird
Why do you want to quote from this book? What you do with the quote will depend on what the project is. You can decide to quote any part of the book, as much or as little as you want to use.
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jacklyn_denise
You cant cut anything out of a “quote” and still call it a quote
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blnpreppy_girl
you can’t cut anything out. take it or leave it.
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