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Provide this all-encompassing experience, putting UIC at the top of the list of a determined diplomat-to-be.
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You are missing the subject of the sentence. While you mention UIC, the way you did it doesn’t work–it isn’t the subject, it is part of a phrase. You either need to add the subject before ‘provide’, or make that phrase the gerund (-ing phrase) and make ‘putting’ into your verb.
UIC provides this all encompasing experience, putting it at the top . . .
Providing this all-e experience puts UIC at the top of the list . . .
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There is no noun. And I would say “an established diplomat…” or “…list of soon-to-be diplomats.”
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It might be OK if you make it ——list of determined diplomats-to-be.
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No. And I can’t help you because I have no idea what you’re trying to say.
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No, it is a sentence fragment.
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