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im writing a narrative about gender and i need someone to help improve it and help me get an ending?

I was standing in front of the PE staffroom, it was a nice sunny day, I felt happy. I knocked on the door; there was a notice about a boy’s cricket team.

“I would like to join the cricket team,” I said.

“You cant you’re a girl”, Mr Davis, the PE teacher replied

“but but but..there is nothing else to do and I love cricket,” I said

“No buts…it’s a boys cricket team and you not a boy, now run along,” Mr Davis said

I stormed off and started to cry in the corner of the corridor… the day just started to get gloomy..thoughts just started going through my mind “Why cant I play!! Argh girls can do what guys can do, we should be treated the same!! I love playing and watching cricket, why cant I play it at school?” I thought to myself.

I heard foot steps and I looked up. It was my friends.. I started to wipe my tears away and hide my emotions; they had never seen me cry…

“aye we have been trying to find you everywhere…what’s wrong?” my friends called out.

“nothing.. im fine,”

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