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Anonymous

i need your help….?

do you like this quote, i made it up for my profile for aim…

the longer you hold on to something that your not supposed to

the more of a chance you have of getting hurt

give me your opinion and how you think i should make it better

thanks!

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ac

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it should say “the more chance you have of getting hurt”
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embroidery fan
Just fix the grammar:

you’re not supposed to have

and:

the greater your chances are of getting hurt.

Otherwise it’s a good idea.

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