i need your help….?
do you like this quote, i made it up for my profile for aim…
the longer you hold on to something that your not supposed to
the more of a chance you have of getting hurt
give me your opinion and how you think i should make it better
thanks!
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it should say “the more chance you have of getting hurt”
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Just fix the grammar:
you’re not supposed to have
and:
the greater your chances are of getting hurt.
Otherwise it’s a good idea.
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