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How do I revise these sentences?

Ok My boyfriend Ted (33 yo) saw his ex girlfriend out and he said hi to her to break the ice, he never got closure from relationship and is happy he finally had a few words with her. Now he said he hopes maybe he can establish a “friendship” with her. I do understand that hes happy he got closure but I want to tell him this and want to reword it better in a sweet, non judging way. I can’t tell him in person since he lives far away.

OK want to reword this and tell him this in a note but dont want to sound jealous- just concerned for him. Please reword what I wrote any writers or people with good grammar thanks:

I am happy for you that you got closure you were seeking.. I can understand you want approval but now let it be that way. I wnat to let him know that it bothers me for him to continue friendship w/ her but not seem jealous. Also want to tell him hes a good guy and want to mention that i want to focus on our budding relationship.

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javi

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I’m so happy you got to see your ex-girlfriend again and that the two of you were able to talk it out and make up. I think it is wonderful that you found a peaceful sort of closure instead of letting the bad parts hang over you life forever. It’s always nice to make things right in the end. I understand that you still remember when you had feelings for her, and would like for her to at least like you again, but I feel that it is time for you to move on. The reason you two split up was because of difference you had between you, and this is likely to cause more difficulties again in the future. I can see why you still like her so much, but it would hurt me to have to watch you go through the same situation all over again. I have tried to support you and know that even if you continue to see her, I will continue to support you. But I just worry that you have forgotten the bad times with her. I want to be here for you, and I want to be your friend, and that’s what friends do; they look out for each other. I hope you consider this when you think about this situation. Also, even though I would support you, it would be hard for me to see you in that type of situation and might make me a little bit uncomforatable. I want to really be your friend and I really care.
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CARMIE
I’m happy that you got the closure you were seeking- I can understand you wanting approval but it’s time to let it go. This way you can move on with your life and pay attention to our budding relationship. You are such a great guy and should look to your future with me. We have so many new things to understand about each other, so we can be happy with our relationship. Looking forward to see/be with you again.

I hope this helps you, but really why do you want to settle for someone far away from you? This old girlfriend might just want to take him back. What will you do then?

Good luck !!!

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Anonymous
I am happy for you that you got the closure you were seeking from your previous relationship. However, with all due respect, I want to focus on us…and only us. You are a wonderful man, and I hope you understand how I feel. Love always, [your name]
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Anonymous
Dear Theodore my love,

Get over it

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