Hi, what do you think of this sentence? Is it structurally correct? Thanks?
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This Down Payment Guarantee Letter shall contain no notes and other corrections.
______ If there are any notes or corrections, this Down Payment Guarantee Letter shall be deemed as being invalid.
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I’d say: “no notes or other corrections”, and in the second part, “shall be deemed invalid”.
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I think the second version is more clear, and could be made clearer by stating:
“This down payment guarantee will become invalid, should any additions or alterations be made to it.”
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The second sentence should be changed to “…shall be deemed invalid,” but otherwise, everything is fine.
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Why don’t you just go see a lawyer and get professional legal advice?
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