Grammer Help?
could someone edit these sentences for me and tell me if the punctuation is right and/or any changes that need to be made:
1. I remember thinking that I couldn’t wait until I could play the keys on the piano like the man did at church, so fast and eloquently.
2. I knew it had been a while since I had left the living room and I needed to get back, so that we could begin my piano lessons for the day.
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I remember thinking that I couldn’t wait to play the keys fast and eleoquently like the man @ church did.
I knew it had been a while since I’d left the living rooom. I needed to get back so that we could begin my piano lessons for the day.
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um… ok!!!
1. I remember thinking that I couldn’t wait until I could play the keys on the piano like the man did at church. So fast and eloquently!
2. I knew it had been a while since I had left the living room and I needed to get back so that we could begin my piano lessons for the day.
is that good?
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