Grammar question: Reword this?

A healthy community is dependent on the the multiple components of the healthcare system, including the healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, public health departments, among other things.

Hope that helps.

There is a wide abundance of vital components in the healthcare system, which make it vital to the health community; a few of these include the healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, and public health departments.

well for one you NEVER start a sentence with AND. Depending on the what the following sentence is or if this sentence is starting a new paragraph u want to word something like this:

“Furthermore, the healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, public health departments, and the abundance of other components that make up the healthcare system are vital to the health community.”

A healthcare system is vital to a health community and is made up of the healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, public health departments, and an abundance of other components.

Previous:

“And the healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, public health departments, and the abundance of other components that make up the healthcare system are vital to a health community.”

After:

“The healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, public health departments and the abundance of other components are what come together to make up the healthcare system that is vital to a healthy community.”

first off, I think sentences should never start with ‘AND’ unless it’s absolutely necessary.

‘The health care system are vital to the health community. Health care Providers’ office, laboratories, public health departments, and the help of other components make up our health care system.’

Most of it has to be capitalized depending if it’s a place. So ‘The Hearth care Providers office’ sounds like a place, so should be in capitals, Public Health Departments sounds like a company, but I could be wrong, if not a company bring to lower case letters. Also health care are two different words and shouldn’t be joined, and run on sentences are not good either.

“The healthcare providers office, laboratories, and public health departments are vital to a health community, as well as the abundance of other components that make up the healthcare system”

well, to me it sounds like it is only a subject. “And the healthcare provider’s office, laboratories, public health departments, and the abundance of other components that make up the healthcare system are vital to a health community, what?” what components make up the health care system that are vital is it talking about? hope this helped

Vital to the health care community are the abundance of other components that make up the health care system, such as the public health departments, laboratories, health care provider’s office as well as many others.

The health care system is made of many components, including laboratories, public health departments, and health care providers’ offices. All of these components are vital to a health community.