grammar help?

no your commas are correctly located and make sense.

i don’t believe you put a comma after ‘if prices rise’ since it is not a complete thought? and if I were to punctuate I would do this…. If prices rise people will shop elsewhere, and, as a result, the store will lose its customers. Or just get rid of the ‘and’ completely which may sound better, make 2 sentences, or do a colon thing there.

If prices rise, people will shop elsewhere; and as a result, the store will lose its customers.

-or-

you could replace the semicolon after elsewhere with a comma. Generally, if there are a bunch of commas in the first independent clause, you should use a semicolon.

You have more than 1 way to re-write this. When you use the word “if” as a condition the word “then” should follow at some point.

Like this: If prices rise then people will shop elsewhere, resulting in customer loss for the store.

Or this: If prices rise, people will shop elsewhere; as a result the store will lose its customers.

this is how the sentence should read: “If prices rise, people will shop elsewhere, and, as a result the store will lose its customers.” this is coming from a college education.

oopsie is very wrong. ‘if prices rise’ is a prepositional phrase therefore, definitely needs a comma after it and to put a comma before and after the word ‘and’ is a huge mistake.

sentence is correct as it, dont change it

As you have used the conjunction “and”, I don’t think so.

I mean that you do not have to add comma before as.

yes

nope no need !!!

No….