Does this sentence make sense? If not how should I phrase it?
“Research portfolios can be customized for customers in conjunction with their particular project.”
Also could I rephrase it to sound better?
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It’s a complete sentence, but sounds techanical and weird.
If I were you, “customized” should be changed for other synynoms. I would use organized or something.
Do you know why it sounds weird?
It’s because “customized for customers in conjunction”<<0
A customer’s research portfolio is customized to suit his particular project.
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Research portfolios can be customized for each customer to suit their particular project.
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Research portfolios may be customized for customers together with a project of their choosing.
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Research portfolios may be customized for customers according to their particular needs.
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“Research portfolios may be personalized for customers in conjunction with a particular project.”
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Research portfolios are customized for each client’s individual needs.
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I think it would sond better if it were changed just a little- like …customized to suit the needs of each project…
something like that.
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that sounds good but yea u should rephrase it
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