can you plz proofread?
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(Fill in here with what departments or areas in the banking industry that you performed)….
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__________—–__________—–__________
Also having knowledge in financial management, …, and …
2. Having knowledge with financial management, __________, __________ and __________.
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__________—–__________—–__________
It would also be a plus to put in (to either place with in or aft) the 2nd parcel sentence — with what training, schooling, on-hand experience and such things as “certificates, diplomas, etc..
I have worked in the financial and banking industry for the past two years.
Actually, you need to tell the reader (of your resume, I presume) who it was you worked for and what, exactly you did, with some emphasis on something (or things) you were particularly proud of, how it helped your employer.
Saying you are “experienced in the financial and banking industry” is sort of like saying “worked in the medical field” which could be true whether that work was as a doctor, a nurse, or an orderly or even a janitor. If you want to impress the reviewer, you need to be open, honest and informative.
Just say two years, a few months – give or take- isn’t going to make a difference.
If you mean the one sentence posted, I would change it to:
I have approximately two years of experience in the industries of finance and banking.
I have around two years of expeience in finanicial and banking industry.
If your not saying in 1st person, then just cross out “I have around”
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