can you please help me in my english essay?

I would play up the “love them or hate them” aspect of this and the rivalry between the two teams.

One thing to caution you on, I’m not a big baseball fan and your teacher may not be either — so try and make your essay something that is interesting to a broad range of readers. Look for some great trivia about each team, etc.

Also, the two circle thing is useful if you need it, but unless your teacher specifically tells you to do it and assigns it as part of the essay, if you can write it without, that’s a good thing.

The “Venn Diagram” is agreat way to compare and contrast and teachers love it. It is also a great tool for the student to get ideas and clarify points to be compared and contrasted.

Your thesis could be that managerial and players’ experience will make the difference in winning a championship. The Yankees have far more playoff and World Series experience, and that will be the deciding factor in the playoffs and Series.

Make a Venn diagram with coomon points in the middle being that they are both in New York, a great baseball city, and both have historic, outdoor stadiums.

Then list your differences on each side by team.

You can use that as a sort of outline for your essay – remember… opening paragraph that states and summarizes what you will say – at least 3 body paragraphs of your research, information and persuasion of thesis, and concluding paragraph which summarizes what you have written.

Go get ’em.