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can you make this sentence better?

I feel that I can work at a greater potential in your caring atmosphere.

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Instead of “at a greater potential,” put “to my full potential.”

It looks like you’re trying to say that the atmosphere of this place will bring out your best. You want to tell them there will be an increase in the actual quality of your work, not in what you could be capable of. That’s why “at a greater potential” isn’t the way to go.

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Chalie M
I feel in your caring atmosphere my working potential could be much greater.
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aWellWisher
I feel that in your caring atmosphere I can work at a greater potential.

(Giving more importance to ‘your caring atmosphere’)

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Anonymous
I feel that your caring atmosphere can inspire me to work at evengreater potential
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T
I feel that I can work more efficiently in your caring atmosphere.

I believe I can reach my full potential in your caring atmosphere.

I feel that in your caring atmosphere I can work at greater potential.

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Lord Odin
My potential shall peak under the guidance of your caring atmosphere
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Anonymous
I believe that I can work to the best of my abilities in the atmosphere of care and nurture provided by your organisation.
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smiling
i have great potential..if given the opportunity, I would be able to demonstrate my skills in your caring environment.

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I have the potential to do the required job.

if given the opportunity, to work in your caring environment,

I would be able to demonstrate my skills.

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jonz4
I think I can reach my greatest potential in your caring atmosphere.

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nancydeanna
It is my impression that I am able to acheive at an improved status within your company’s considerate workplace environment.
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