can u pls correct my grammar. pls??
its not the luck that broth us together, it was destened
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I don’t see any grammar problem.
Spelling and punctuation, though … ugh
It’s not … brought us together. It was destiny.
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Hmm, I would correct the use of “the” and “is” in the first clause. You’re talking about an event that happened in the past; therefore, the use of “was” is more appropriate.
“It was not our luck that brought us together, but rather it was our destiny.”
or….
“It was not our luck that brought us together. It was our destiny.”
There are other acceptable answers as well. How formal do you want to be? The use of “our” is optional, but remember that the sentence has to retain its parallelism.
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It’s not luck that brought us together, it was destiny.
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not so sure what you need but uh…
Its not the luck that brought us together , it was destiny or destined to be.
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4 years ago
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IT’S not luck that BROUGHT us together, it was DESTINED TO BE—or it was DESTINY.
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