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Your advertisement on monster.com caught my attention for the entry-level position that is available at Robert HalfFinance & Accounting. I am actively seeking employment with firms in the Tampa area. My courses in investments, finance and business have given me a solid base upon which I plan to build to build my career.

The opportunity presented in this ad is very interesting, and I believe that my strong technical experience and education will make me an excellent candidate for this position. The key strengths that I possess for success in this position include:

• I have experience in general ledger, financial statements, and QuickBooks.

• I strive for continued excellence

• I provide exceptional contributions to customer service for all customers

I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review my qualifications and experience. I hope that you’ll find my experience, interests, and character intriguing enough to warrant a face-to-face meeting, as I am confident that I could provide value to you and your customers as a member of your team. I can be reached at my cell phone at (