All you excellent english people please come here! I need help expanding my conclusion to my essay! Thanks!!!!

I found a website that gave you suggestions on how to write an effective conclusion. One of the tips was to have a friend ask you the question of “so what?” I used it and found it really helped me! Here’s how it works.

Blind individuals owe so much to the man who liberated them from the oppressive darkness of their blindness.

You: “So What?”

Before Braille opened up the doors of occupations such as computer programmer, instructor, and telephone operator, blind individuals were limited

to learning a trade, such as chair weaving and slipper designing.

You: “So what?”

As “Louis Braille” demonstrates, blind individuals are capable of creating a renown system of reading as a result of their determination and

can serve as role models for future generations of blind students.

I hope this was as helpful for you as it was for me. You can have a friend actually say “so what” and you respond, or you can say it in your head and write down your responses. I was going to do it the first way I mentioned, but did it the second way instead.

I think that was a great conclusion, by the way, where you have agendas, take out the apostrophe. If you need another line or two, add something after the third sentence to talke about how they might run on their agendas.

Let’s see…. the superiority of ones self is subjective and and in essence unattainable because it is fabrication. In a sense perfection only exists in the realm of people’s minds. This leads society to strive for their own intimate perfection and give them a feel fulfillment and satisfaction.

I hope this is a help to you…

“there is nothing wring for every girl to strive to be perfect…” also please do not use “in her eyes”,you can use “in her heart”. nobody could achieve perfection but as long as you strive for it, you can be close to it.but how can you strive harder? put it in your heart. by putting it in your heart.

“Please do not give me bad grades for my creative punctuation and weird grammar. I am proving a point about not achieving perfection. I am very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very clever in this way. Because I am a girl. Accept me as I am.

The End

or is it?”