this sentence make sense?
After less than a year as Governor-General, he made the controversial decision to dismiss Gough Whitlam as Prime Minister
the part where it says dismiss GW as Pm
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I would add the reason for the dismissal
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I think it might, but it could sound better if you said “he made the controversial decision to dismiss Gough Whitlam from the position of Prime Minister.”
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Yeah, it makes sense. The “he” is the Gov-Gen, and “he” made a decision to dismiss GM from his position as PM, though “he” had been in office as Gov-Gen for less than a year.
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Sounds like a legitimate question to me.
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Replace “he” with the guys name. It sounds better if you know who you are referring to.
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Yes, it seems fine! No grammar/spelling problem that I can see! Well, put your . at the end of your sentence!
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perfect , Im a A college english student, trust me.
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sounds ok 2 me
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sounds good to me
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Yes, it is written correctly.
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