sentence structure?
how can i switch up a few words in this sentence to make it sound better…
“one of the main reasons why she does not marry him is because he is considered poor and she is rich”
how can i make this sentence better? thanks
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option 1:the fact that he is viewed upon as being poor and she is wealthy plays a strong factor in her not wanting to marry him.
option2:the intention behind her not marrying him is the sole purpose that she is regarded to have a much higher status compared to the poor wealth that the man possesses.
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One of the main reasons she doesn’t want to marry the poor man is because she is rich.
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The main reason she won’t marry him is because he is poor while she is rich. Hope I helped 🙂
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I couldn’t think of any other way to make it sound better. The sentence itself is clear with just one flaw. “Why” should not be used to precede “reason”. It’s redundancy.
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I actually think that sounds great.
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