Can u correct this? part 2?

1. Fred never MISSED (or misses) HIS daily workout because he BELIEVED (or believes) (-THAT) THEY WOULD KEEP (or keep) him physically fit. (Or Fred could be a girl?)

2. A SPOUSE sometimes EXPECTS too much from HIS OR HER PARTNER.

OR

SPOUSES sometimes EXPECT too much from THEIR PARTNERS.

3. Our neighbor moved in two weeks ago, but I still have YET to meet her.

4. Someone has blocked the parking lot with HIS OR HER car.

5. (I would change ‘not one’ to ‘none’, but I think technically this is correct. Some people would argue that ‘their’ should be ‘his or her’, however.)

1. Fred never miss(es) her(his) daily workout because he believes that these will keep her(him) physically fit.

Should be:

Fred never misses his daily workout because he believes that these will keep him physically fit.

2.Spouse(s) sometimes expect too much from his(their) partners.

Should be:

Spouses sometimes expect too much from their partners.

3.Our neighbor moved in two weeks ago, but I (am)still have(yet) to meet her.

Shpuld be:

Our neighbour moved in two weeks ago, but I am still yet to meet her.

4.Someone has blocked (up)the parking lot(,) with their car.

Should be:

Someone has blocked up the parking lot, with their car.

5.Not one(a single) of the coaches(coach) wil return to their(its) jobs (job) after the first(“)time game(“).

Should be:

Not a single coach will return to its job after the first “time game”.

1. Fred never miss(ed) h(is) daily workout because he believes that th(is) will keep h(im) physically fit.

2.(A) Spouse sometimes expect(s) too much from his partners.

3.Our neighbor moved in two weeks ago, but I still have to meet (them).

4.Someone blocked the parking lot with their car.

5.(None) of the coaches wil(l) return to their jobs after the first game.

1. Fred never misses her daily workout as she believes it will keep her physically fit.

2. Spouses, sometimes expect too much from their partners

3. think this is correct

4. may be correct

5. none of the coaches will return to their jobs after the first game.

hope i am right……. and it helps.

1.Fred never misses…………

2. this sentence is correct

3.Our neighbour……….(but it can also been written neighbor as it is.

4.Someone has blocked the parking lot with his\her car.

5. No one of the coaches……….

1. miss – missed. her – his. Comma after workout. Delete believes. her – him.

2. comma after spouse. expect – expects.

3. neighbor – neighbour. comma after neighbour.

4. Fine.

5. wil – will. the – their first.